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One for critique ....


Keeff

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I've not posted any during build pictures of this, but completed it at last .... and the first of 2023!

This is an out of box build, so nothing special and it's one being used to hone my techniques.  I have taken some time on the canvas to try to make it realistic looking, it does have some highlights along the edges and where the support hoops would be aswell as some subtle shading.  Weathered using mostly splashes.  

 

Thoughts?  

 

52640983724_ba7532badd_k.jpg20230121_140407 by Ran Domstuff, on Flickr

 

52640983809_734eafea4b_k.jpg20230121_140345 by Ran Domstuff, on Flickr

 

52641200923_89cbbcf699_k.jpg20230121_140418 by Ran Domstuff, on Flickr

 

52641164960_ec04c8b6d0_k.jpg20230121_140430 by Ran Domstuff, on Flickr

 

Thanks for looking! 

 

Keith   😁

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Looks effective and I think you've done a good job on the canopy and mud splashes, if I could offer one suggestion: perhaps add some streaking or a clearer area on the front windscreen which would be cleared by the wipers ...?  

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Nice LWB Landy. If I might say..........the splashes look as if they have occurred whilst the vehicle was standing still, and was splashed by a passing vehicle. They have no direction to them. If it had picked up the mud whilst moving, then they would be in an upwards and backwards direction.

HTH's.

 

John.

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Thank you for the comments @Richard E and @Bullbasket.... I do agree with you and have learnt a few things, particularly with the weathering which is part of the enjoyment!  

Keith 😁 

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On 1/22/2023 at 12:11 PM, Richard E said:

front windscreen which would be cleared by the wipers

Nice work.

Maybe ran out of windscreen wash fluid?

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